Why we love this
Is this the sexiest bit of copy you'll ever see? Not at all. But we took this screenshot because it's a really good example of a brand that really gets their customers and what they're looking for when they're about to hit that Buy Now button.
Steal this for your brand
Peachies' whole business model is built on subscriptions. Their nappies are not an impulse purchase in the shop. They’re not an “oh, can you grab some Peachies and some formula on your way home?” Not to mention, they’re more expensive per nappy.
And yet, they grew roughly 10X in 2024 through their subscription model.
And that doesn’t happen by accident.
Here's a few things this bit of copy does really well:
So here's the thing you can steal: does your copy make a case for repeat purchases or subscriptions?Here's the thing about subscription copy that most brands miss. It's not about pushing the subscription harder — it's about making sure your messaging is actually built for one.
A one-off purchase needs to clear a single hurdle: is this worth it right now?
Copy to sell a subscription needs to clear a different one: is this going to be worth it every single month?
Peachies nail it because "no leaks, no worries, just perfect nights" isn't solving an occasional problem, it's showing value on a daily basis. That justifies a subscription.
So if you're pushing subscriptions and it's not converting, it might not be the offer that's the problem. It might be that your copy is still written for a one-time buyer. Try flipping it to focus on the ongoing benefits of your product rather than the immediate benefits and see what happens. (AG1 really lean into this too, if you take a look.)